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I look in the mirror and it fills with words
Imperfect
Tired
Sloppy
Reckless
Rushed
I look in my mind and it fills with words
Hypocritical
Hateful
Impure
Disobedient
Misunderstood
I look in my heart and it fills with words
Envious
Lonely
Longing
Unloved
Spiteful
I look in Your eyes and I see who You made me:
Beautiful
Beloved
If Only
I’d
Listen
©2007-2009 ~GloriaVelVessa
:icongloriavelvessa:

Author's Comments

I love writing freestyle poetry when I have free time and feel overloaded with emotions. I'm not the best, but tell me what you think. I know there's room for improvement.

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:iconmooseyfate4all:
Its great... *sigh* reminds me of what happened to me recently

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Better never to have met you in my dream than to wake and reach for hands that are not there
:icongloriavelvessa:
Thank you so much =] And yeah, I think we all have times like this... unfortunately.
:iconmooseyfate4all:
your welcome :)

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Better never to have met you in my dream than to wake and reach for hands that are not there
:iconpepsiboy81:
And you're a Christian too! I don't see many other Christians on dA that's for sure.

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"Give day; and, since thy sovereign will is such, / Destruction with it; but, O give us day."
:icongloriavelvessa:
Yeah me either... it's sort of depressing. And wow, you're out commenting me, I'd better go read more of your poetry =)

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